The fog moving between the trees along Squaw Creek made it seem as if the valley were breathing. This is good ground. Sacred.
This ground has been treaded by warriors chosen to wear the Cardinal and the Gold; treaded by warriors that defend this place named after the one man fought and lost his life on the field… The man that stands as a legend that represents - Treading New Paths - Exceeding Expectations – Honor Before Victory.
The General rises to his mount. In the distance he hears the bells between the claps of thunder. In his veins flow pride. Its time to fortify, hold this ground, and stake their claim on history.
Considering the type of prose you seem to be shooting for here, I would recommend "trod" as the past tense of "tread" rather than "treaded". Just a thought.
"There are five real good recruits in the state. We got three of them. One couldn’t get into school, and the other went to (the University of) Iowa...which is about the same thing." - Coach Johnny Orr
Considering the type of prose you seem to be shooting for here, I would recommend "trod" as the past tense of "tread" rather than "treaded". Just a thought.
Technically, shouldn't it be "trodden"? Disclaimer: I sucked at English.
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